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    dots Submission Name: Wasted Timedots
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    Author: Specdro
    ASL Info:    28/Of Course/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 21/53/38
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsWasted Timedots
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    Wandering minds pondering times that have passed
    Talking mouths speaking about times that wonít last

    Busy hands building buildings structured to stand the test of time
    People occupied by other peopleís inhuman crimes

    Wasted people, wasted lives
    Wasted time till the day itís deprived

    We could make it better but we hesitate
    Then in the end we realize itís just too late




    Submitted on 2007-05-21 17:55:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice... I would wright a longer comment but I am a waste of sperm...and it might be another waste of time...huh???
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]


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