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    dots Submission Name: Summers Promise.dots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1025
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       For the past year, I was in a state of unhappiness. It even got to the point where I wanted to feel that way. This month, May 2007, things have been turning around...a lot... I've found my happiness, & this poem is about just that.


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    Walking the ebony streets on a Summers midnight
    The world at this hour seems that of my own
    Organizing my thoughts, as they seemed so lost at one point
    The elation I've forever longed for can finally be shown

    Tonight I'm meeting myself for the very first time
    I have been a stranger to me for the years past
    And though I still hold a sense of insecurity within
    I feel like I'm getting to know myself at last

    Yet I'm still confused about where my happiness was found
    There's a feeling inside telling me I'm doing something right
    I guess I'll take it as the Summers promise
    As I sit and watch the stars lighten my midnight




    Submitted on 2007-05-21 20:21:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wonderful poem! You go gal! Get the positive juices flowing and miracles are at your fingertips!! Just to add to your upward momentum, please read my poem "Stairway To The Stars"!!!
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Thoughts... hummm...It sounds like a speach that rimes...that some one on happy pills would give to there cat...(I do that)

    -cricket
    | Posted on 2007-05-21 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]


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