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Truly,Deeply


Author: caballero7137
ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9 /104 /123
Words: 88
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Truly,Deeply



My eyes drool deeply
with hard brewed
mellow sorrow sadness
that burns the white paint
of my fragile flesh.
Two streaming strains
braided like a scar
that has penetrated
profound deep depths
of my soul.

I kneel down to pray
but awaken in the bed
of my peasant tomb
with an Anaconda
that slices my head
with the mere lick
of its tongue
and swims
with devilish pleasure
into the rivers
and streams of my blood
I am but one less
to endure.





Submitted on 2007-05-21 22:30:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ok yeah thats depressing. White painted flesh I like that line, so artificial realy. Nothing worse than wanting to get out of your own skin I think.
Hope you cheer up soon.
Take care.
| Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked the lines..
Two streaming strains
braided like a scar
You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself, chocked full of bright imagery i can only hope to employ.
| Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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