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    dots Submission Name: Truly,Deeplydots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsTruly,Deeplydots
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    My eyes drool deeply
    with hard brewed
    mellow sorrow sadness
    that burns the white paint
    of my fragile flesh.
    Two streaming strains
    braided like a scar
    that has penetrated
    profound deep depths
    of my soul.

    I kneel down to pray
    but awaken in the bed
    of my peasant tomb
    with an Anaconda
    that slices my head
    with the mere lick
    of its tongue
    and swims
    with devilish pleasure
    into the rivers
    and streams of my blood
    I am but one less
    to endure.





    Submitted on 2007-05-21 22:30:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ok yeah thats depressing. White painted flesh I like that line, so artificial realy. Nothing worse than wanting to get out of your own skin I think.
    Hope you cheer up soon.
    Take care.
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the lines..
    Two streaming strains
    braided like a scar
    You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself, chocked full of bright imagery i can only hope to employ.
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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