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    dots Submission Name: Love Songdots
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    Author: Starless Knight
    ASL Info:    20/female/US
    Elite Ratio:    6.11 - 180/204/105
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Haiku/Depressed
    Total Views: 1119
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 80



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    dotsLove Songdots
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    I hear a sweet song,
    It seems so familiar
    tinged with such sorrow.




    Submitted on 2007-05-22 11:34:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Kris,
    Obviously, the other commentor has never read a Haiku. There is nothing that needs nor should be changed with this Haiku. The word "tinged" is perfectly choosen; it really pulls the whole work together to create your image and thought. Great job. A favourites addition for sure.

    Mykquillion
    | Posted on 2007-11-15 00:00:00 | by Mykquillion | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, this may just be me but this needs something,
    let me think what it might be, oh yeah more lines,
    im not trying to be mean, but this is enough to go on,
    i think if you worked on it a little more, or if you have more to it, you really need to put it on here.
    So if you do let me know then i will get back to it.
    Untill then peace.
    | Posted on 2007-05-22 00:00:00 | by WonderfulComa | [ Reply to This ]


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