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    dots Submission Name: My Intentionsdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       See, I do things thinking I am making a good decision.. thinking this is the best. But later down the road that choice I made, that decision I made thinking it was for the best, it was not. And I end up hurting, him .. someone I love with all my heart and so much more..Someone I long to spend the rest of my life with, someone.. whom has done nothing wrong but be there for me hold me while I cry.. and yet I repay him by trying to spare him but in return simply hurting him 10x more than I ever could imagined...


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    dotsMy Intentionsdots
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    I see now that although my intention may be for the best..
    That even if I feel I should hold certain things back from others
    To spare their feelings..
    To spare possible tears that maybe shed..

    By doing such things...
    Hiding things from whom you love and adore..
    To save thier possbile broken heart

    When revealed later down the road
    It is inevitable that these things will come out in the open..

    And despite my intentions

    I hurt you


    Just as I did myself

    And for this I can only apologize,
    Insist that you nor I will ever have to experince such a nasty thing again!

    But see my word, means very little now
    Now...
    That I have given you a reason
    To question my word,
    To question my where abouts

         I feel so low

         So small

    Because of the choices I have made,
    They have hurt you to a degree I never imagined myself ...ME
    Hurting you, but I have

    But because of this,
    Because of the events that followed my poor decision making..

    I have learned..
    Learned that no matter what I think or feel at the time..

    I will be completely and absolutely
    Honest with you and others whom surround me in this life I live.





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      I love it! i agree the way you changed the font to go along with it was very cool and original! I can definitly relate to this one! nice write!
    | Posted on 2007-06-29 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
      This...was very great. I know so well how you feel! I loved how you made the font adjust wat you were saying....very different...very cool. Thanks so much for the nice words on my poem Beauty in the dark! I really appreciate it.

    It was actually something I went through when I moved ....and the last question.... meaning....things missed with my best friend.
    | Posted on 2007-06-19 00:00:00 | by Raindrops | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice one. (first comment again.) I know how you feel, I'm in love with someone called Kerry, but she's as pissed off with me that I'm almost like a chav to her. Sorry haven't written in a while, didn't feel in the mood. Shadow

    p.s. I don't really care who knows, I love Kerry until my dying day!
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]


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