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    dots Submission Name: Trustdots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 327
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    Some expect this to simply be there...
    Maybe because they are elders to others

    Others feel it is earned from those whom surround them in their life

    And then there are those people out there
    That once its earned,
    Once you have breached that point
    You have their ..

    It can never be extinct..

    But then there may come a time when you..
    Have given them a reason to no longer trust you.

    Not because you are untrustworthy
    Not because you are irresponsible

    But because you have poor decision making skills.
    And this you learn as time goes on
    Something you have to go through in order to make good choices...

    I do my best to make those who come in contact with myself .. happy.
    I do my best to not hurt those whom I love and care for unintentionally

    Yet the choices I make to do this, comes back and does excatly what I go out of my way for.

    And that is hurting them.

    I know that within time I will gain back the trust I have lost with those certain people I have betrayed.
    I know that given the correct amount of time things will be okay.

    But knowing I have hurt him,
    On a level I never that was possbile,
    For me to reach
    When it came to breaking his heart.

    Scares me,
    If I have done this simply by misjudging a decision
    Something that could have been so easily avoided

    Then what else can I do..
    That I do not relize I can?

    What else...how..
    I am... was only trying to help a sticky sistuation..
    Rather than making it more messy

    But again I did excatly that!
    If I am capable of what I never thought I was to begin with..

    Then what else is the furture going to suprise me with?

    Submitted on 2007-05-22 14:41:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha, not many people do trust each other anymore. To them its just a word. All the same good write, now I'm in the mood for a bit of poetry myself. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]

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