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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 769
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    See as of right now,
    At this very moment...

    I am content..

    Content with who I am
    Content with where I am in this life I lead

    Day in and day out

    And at this very moment if I were given a choice to change anything in my life..

    My answer would be

    "No Thank You"

    Granted there are things that are flawed within this life,
    But what kind of life would this be if.. there were no imperfections?

    We has humans I feel
    Fall in love with one another imperfections

    Rather than their poise
    Or their subtlety

    At this point in my life I am satisfied
    With the way things are...

    I have made my share of mistakes..
    Yes,
    With these mistakes come consequences

    But I am willing to work through this
    And eventually come out on TOP!




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      NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! They beat me!!! Nice poem by the way, but... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm ruined! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oh god !!!!
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great spirit! Wish I felt the way you do.

    Lee
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by foxy lee | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful Jackz, Totally beautiful!!

    ~Matt
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]


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