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    dots Submission Name: Love is Bullshit.dots
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    Author: Derrick Thomas
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 21/59/39
    Words: 681
    Class/Type: Rant/Love
    Total Views: 11106
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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       An essay.

    Don't point out how hypocritical this is.


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    dotsLove is Bullshit.dots
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    Just something I was thinking about earlier. I have a really hard time trusting the female population. Jensie ruined it for all you people. I never know if I am being lied to. The truth can pretty easily turn into a lie. Even accidentally.

    I'm scared of relationships because of the fear of them turning sour, if you can dig that. It tends to make relationships seem pointless. Just something to do in-between sex sessions.

    Realistically, most relationships don't work out. Probably whomever you are with now, you aren't going to be with them forever, regardless of what you think. You can say 'I'll love you forever' and all that bullshit, but what does it really mean?

    Nothing. It's just something that people say. It is completely meaningless. To think that you are ever in a position to say, 'Hey dude, I'll love you forever and we'll get married and die laying in the same bed together' is fucking ridiculous. People change their minds. People lie. People fuck up. People are stupid. People cheat. People fall out of love.

    Fuck people.

    Relationships, to me, seem like a drug. You find you a girl that you dig, you fuck her for a while, then she (or you) will eventually (most likely) break up and be sad and heartbroken and miserable. (This applies to being in a relationship with someone you care about, not this fake fuck buddy shit that most people have going on.) So basically what I am trying to say is that it's good for a while and then it probably will get bad.

    And, to make matters worse, the longer its good, the worse the bad part will be. Can you see how that is like a drug?

    Love is fake. Think about it. Love is a feeling, that's all. Feelings are created by your body for various reasons. All 'love' is is your body saying 'Oh ho ho, here we have something fuckable. I'd better produce happy feelings so I can reproduce!' There is no magic kind of love in the world.

    Being 'in love' is exactly the same as an addiction. All that it means to be in love with someone is you have found someone to fuck that isn't annoying. Think about that. After you break up, it's going to hurt, just like if you stopped doing a drug. Your body goes through love withdrawal symptoms for a while because for however long it has been producing the 'happy love' chemical and then it just stops all of a sudden.

    People that have experienced 'love at first sight' can be broken down into one category: Simple minded. To believe that it is possible to just look at someone and love them is absolutely insane. You can't just love someone automatically, unless you are at about the same maturity level as a seventh grader. 'Love at first sight' is synonymous with 'Wanting to fuck at first sight.'

    "But I knew from the first time I saw her that I would spend the rest of my life with her."

    No, actually the first time you saw her, your brain screamed 'I want to fuck that!' and so you went up and talked to her. If a marriage and a happily ever after ending comes from it, then ALL that fucking means is that her brain screamed "I want to fuck that!" when she saw you.

    Getting to know people that you are interested in a relationship with is just a way of your brain finding you something to fuck that isn't going to annoy you.

    Love is your body producing a feeling that you will like so that you will keep this person around, and fuck them.

    Love is propaganda. Fuck relationships, fuck love, fuck people, and most of all dear reader: Fuck you.

    Someone prove me wrong.

    Excuse me, I have to go hang out with my girlfriend.




    Submitted on 2007-05-23 15:02:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the ending makes me laugh now.
    | Posted on 2008-01-16 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this rant because I agree with most of it. Love at first sight is just lust. It's impossible to love someone you don't know. I did, however, get tired of hearing the word f.uck used over and over again. But it worked. I like the last line, it made me laugh my ass off. Great job.

    Peace,
    Love,
    And weed for all!
    | Posted on 2007-05-26 00:00:00 | by Magic Dragon | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this because it is true, which is why I say I am not in love with Cory. We have something better than love, we have a commited relationship that we both recignize(though not able to really accept it possibly) that at any time it could end.


    So I really dug this because it's pretty much true.
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      i don't appreciate this.
    at all.
    but i won't be pissed about it, because i don't think you wrote it to piss me off, i think you wrote it because you might honestly believe it.

    it's sad that you think that though.
    i really do love you.
    i would have fallen in love with you even if we didn't have sex.
    i think there's more to it than sex. it wasn't about sex when we got together, as far as i know.

    but i could be wrong.
    either way, i love you.
    xoxox
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]
      I will agree that love is like a drug, it sends everything all out of wack, everything spins everythings upside down. But it doesnt have to stop!!! You never have to come down from the love *HIGH* or *BUZZ* you don't if it's really love!

    Love isn't about *[censored]ing*

    I love love!!!!

    But you did brong up a few good points

    love at first site is jst sexual attraction.

    Ill love you forever means nothing as who knows what the future will bring

    But if your happy with who your with or who your *[censored]ing* why should it end?

    As long as your haapy and enjoying life why end it or [censored] it up???

    Was a very good write and i all of us feel a little down sometimes...

    Nat

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by Natie | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha, that made me laugh. The last line gave the whole thing a good punch. Since you didn't specify critique, but thoughts, I'll stick with that.

    I agree with the whole "love at first sight" being bull[censored]. It's just not possible. "Love" is deeper than that. Attraction at first sight, sure. But if you haven't even talked to a person, how can you even consider calling that love?

    Love in general is a mystery to me, anyway. Since I've yet to feel it, I can't really imagine what's it like, sort of like a straight-edge person trying to imagine being as high as a kite. They just don't get it. So, maybe that's what my problem is-- that I don't get it. But maybe the true reason is that "love" really doesn't exist, it's just some warped placebo affect caused by the drugged feeling one gets when being with another person. To attach such a symbolic, romantic feel (roses, walking on the beach at sunset, marriage, etc) onto the word just doesn't seem right. That's my take on it, anyway.

    I like the blunt, almost harsh way you presented your ideas. You weren't sugercoating anything. I suppose to some that can be both offensive and hypocritical, but to me it was just the truth coming out. Although, I think it was just a bit extreme, (which is why it's classified as a rant), I agree with most of what you said. All the couples I see these days are so incredibly awkward with each other at school, but you know in the back of your mind that they're sleeping with each other constantly, but have nothing substantial between them from which to make a conversation out of. It's sad, because I'd like to believe that people are with one other because they have a real connection, not because they just want some ass. Y'know?

    I hope you didn't mind the long review. Your rant got me thinking!

    I hope things get better for you and that you don't feel this way about "love"--whatever it may be-- forever.

    Nice write.

    -Clarisse
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 00:00:00 | by JustClarisse. | [ Reply to This ]


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