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before i can love you


Author: DontLetGo421
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before i can love you



i cant help but subside the feelings i had for you
ive met another, and i'm sure you'll meet one too
there is no comparison between you and my josh
but it worries my mom sick because i am only but a frosh

she says i'm too young, she says i'm being stupid
but you just cant step aside from the arrow shot by cupid
i know what i'm doing and i can make up my own mind
plus i am awware that it is only just a matter of time

they up and leave without an explanation or a thought
i never knew the feelings were so intense until they were brought
i guess i'll have to gain myself before i can gain you
i guess i'll have to learn to love myself before i can love you




Submitted on 2007-05-23 18:09:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really like the last line of this poem, as it's a good message. However, the rhyme scheme here is very forced sounding. "Josh" and "frosh" is kind of a stretch.
| Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by lithium_poetry | [ Reply to This ]


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