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    dots Submission Name: the passing forgetfulnessdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsthe passing forgetfulnessdots
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    dancing around the outskirts
    of some strange skeleton reflection
    with a gentle halo
    of tomorrows dream over me
    i'll be reminded
    to go plenty mad
    when the breathing stops,
    the clock turns back
    & as many arms
    as you may need
    fold back for the holding

    it seems to be the one thing
    that i look forward to now
    with any sense
    of anticipation
    like the ocean tide
    coming in,
    going out
    then just stopping
    or the moon being eclipsed
    and not coming back
    what would the werewoves do
    on any other day?

    i grasp at things
    but rarely find anything to hold
    outside of a cigarette,
    a glass of the passing forgetfulness
    or a guitar
    that sings for itself
    better than i ever could




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