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    dots Submission Name: what not do with a sea turtledots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dots what not do with a sea turtledots
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    can i collapse here?
    is that alright?
    like some sort of dreamy lawn chair
    lost to a housefire

    have you ever made love
    to a sea turtle
    while standing on your own back?
    don't try it

    my skills serve best
    the seedy pirates
    of my past

    i seem to find humor
    in almost everything
    including my life
    or perhaps especially
    but humorous blackbirds
    are cursed with the laughter
    of their own haunted years
    glistering neath the blistering sun
    somewhere east or west of the moon




    Submitted on 2007-05-23 23:51:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      moment. true cryptic. the sea is so cold.
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, cryptic to a slight extent, and creepy as hell. Made love to a sea turtle??? You got more balls than me.





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    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by Silenced poet | [ Reply to This ]


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