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    Author: Myopic
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 31/58/63
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    it gets in our toiling hands
    out through the
    smoke
    stacks
    into our beaten lungs,
    out into our brides’
    tongues
    into our bouquets
    and ballets,
    apropos,
    and hellos.
    It invades our vision
    I swear to ___
    It will make you take pleasure
    in cataclysm
    in every person
    in every idea
    in
    ev
    er
    y
    context
    in every means
    to a
    meaning
    as you find
    you are leaning,
    day dreaming,
    “that’s reality.”
    They are intervening.

    and they hear you say
    what you leave behind

    there is no pollution
    in a
    rationalized mind.




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