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    dots Submission Name: Wrinkled Collars and 3pm lustdots
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    Author: all the english boys
    ASL Info:    15
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 173/239/46
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsWrinkled Collars and 3pm lustdots
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    the stereo blasts our song
    all i can feel is the bass
    a steady tempo, heavy on the upbeats
    heavy on top of me
    the highlights are those lips
    the lower one is bigger than the top
    i bite my lips in anticipation of a kiss
    one that lasts for twenty minutes
    and neither of breathes, nowhere we have to be
    so give us another hour
    locked alone together
    humidity in the rooms rising, wrinkling our collars
    resting their buttons on the side of your bed
    i close my eyes, feel your longing stare trace my outline
    i feel the heat flush my skin, now red and raw
    i know this is too early, too young
    but it's love, for sure, i can feel it among my hips
    the moans speak of devotion
    the lust speaks of redemption
    and baby, we're just getting started




    Submitted on 2004-06-14 22:49:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      OK, I just decided to stop by and read one of your poems and this is the one I picked. I won't say it's bad, 'cause it isn't, but I will say that you're bad. Just a wee tad bit young there. I feel all dirty even reading this from you.

    It is very good though.
    | Posted on 2004-06-30 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]


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