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    dots Submission Name: following the plaguedots
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    Author: lims karma
    ASL Info:    17/m/ut
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 1/1/1
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 632
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    Bytes: 268



    Description:
       my freind i call "the plague" allways does these 5 minute writings in 6th period after the bell and i really like what he does so here is my honnest attempt to follow his format. i know it doesnt make much sence and its not meant to ryme, but thats how ben does it and thats how i shall do it! besides it says what i feel, which is all he does, i shall send him a message and see how he feels......


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    dotsfollowing the plaguedots
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    the wind blows,
    the wind blows,

    didnt know what
    i thought i should,

    didnt do what
    i thought i could,

    be myself,
    all alone,

    i dont want your help
    because the cost too great




    Submitted on 2007-05-24 14:13:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      tah, am to sezn tocem all to le bentah...lol do you still remeber? anyways refer to my message for my full thoughts on your peice of work, keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by Mr.Ordinary | [ Reply to This ]


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