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    dots Submission Name: The Last Strawdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsThe Last Strawdots
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    I'm tired of trying.
    I'm sick of crying.
    Over you and your bullshit.
    Well that was the last straw and this is it.
    I'm gonna forget you.
    Everything I thought was true.
    Go ahead cry and beg.
    I'm a cripple, stop pullin that leg.
    You burned too many bridges.
    Not I'm torn and rough around the ridges.
    Your nothing in my eyes.
    Go ahead a fake some more cries.
    It doesn't phase me.
    You will never see.
    I'm already numb to the bone.
    Destined to be alone.
    So quit your shit.
    That was the last straw and this is it.




    Submitted on 2007-05-24 15:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you couldnt be to numb to the bone considering the emotion that is put in to this...
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]


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