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    dots Submission Name: Reasons for Livingdots
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    Author: tokillthedead
    ASL Info:    20/Female/CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 53/78/51
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 720
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    Bytes: 395



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       I think it's one of the closest thing I've written to capture how drastic my mood can change ones the sun goes down.


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    dotsReasons for Livingdots
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    My scars theyíre like stitches
    They hold me in place
    Stuck in this word
    With a smile on my face

    A scar for a sunset
    To mark when it hurts
    The shadows bring sadness
    In darkness itís worse

    So Iíll hold it together
    And choke back the tears
    Iíll take a few lines
    And be done with my fears





    Submitted on 2007-05-24 16:23:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this alot i think i'am going to add this to my faves. i've often felt this way and most of the time i still do but for me there not a reason to live there not even even a reason to die, they simpley make it so that i can co-exsist in what people deem as normal society. anyway this was an awsome write!
    ~Jessie~
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      these are some lovely reasons for living I my self have had some lovely scars...
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Cricket | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this, it is held together very nicely and it even has a rhyme scheame to it. Just curious, Why did you choose the title of this to be reasons for living?
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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