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    dots Submission Name: Flight of Mandaladots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 575
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    Bytes: 628



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    dotsFlight of Mandaladots
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    Vibrant sands of compassion
    and patience
    Floating effortless ~ ~ ~

    Patterns emmanating
    the colors endless
    in One
    Eternal
    NOW

    I closed my eyes
    to the external
    and
    BE
    CAME
    tHE
    Third Eye of Within
    the healing river green

    As the sands
    of patient time and symbolism
    Divinely are released
    to the mundane
    and the colors
    float to freedom
    as the Light

    And there is
    no realm
    untouched
    in
    NOW

    Selah




    Submitted on 2007-05-25 12:16:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Embodying that which we have always been
    Saluting the divinity within our skin
    What colors should hue-mans see?
    We are but whispers of eternity
    Pesented the gift of the present

    Your use of assonance guided my eyes from line to line. Sand is so intersting by itself it is miniscule yet so often sand is part of something bigger. We are individuals yet we can never be completely seperated from our source.
    blessings
    peace
    | Posted on 2007-07-17 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]
      I want to know what are the meanings of these two words, selah and emmanating.An introspective piece you have there, like most of my religion thaughts, there will be always a life after death.Men will always comeback to his creator and that is to be dead.

    "Patterns emmanating
    the colors endless
    in One
    Eternal
    NOW"

    This is similar to a after death experience, that we will only see one color that is eternal and that is GOD Almighty, (Allah if i may say)
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by Soldier O_Tears | [ Reply to This ]
      I was just in a graveyard, a really old graveyard, and for some reason this reminds me of being in the graveyard. My son and I took lots of pictures and just enjoyed the peace that only the dead can give, I know this is morbid, but I really like cemetaries, so don't take this as morbid. This write just reminds me of it.
    | Posted on 2007-05-26 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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