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    dots Submission Name: For Adamdots
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    Author: JAvery
    ASL Info:    30/F/Calhoun, GA
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 30/43/29
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 77
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 475



    Description:
       I wrote this for a friend who's going through a divorce that he really didn't want. I sat with him one day, just seeing everything that was going on in his head despite his poor attempts to hide it.


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    dotsFor Adamdots
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    Attempt a smile
    as the wind howls
    riccochets neverending
    Punishes the ribs
    The heart
    Forces the external grasp
    to slacken.
    The storm rears in the eyes
    in the vibrations of skin.
    Let the rain come
    The tempest take you
    The lightening flash
    and set fire upon everything.
    Release it
    let love warm you
    heal the damage.
    Allow- don't attempt
    to smile again.




    Submitted on 2007-05-25 13:04:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, sad stuff certainly, and entirely too true, too often.... very ably done in your deft poetic hands here... I liked it a great deal ... bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Sad, I don't really know what to say. I think this was written very well and it shows a lot of loss and sadness.
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by luckyms20 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, divorce, especially if unwanted or out of the blue is a difficult time and loss is always tough to deal with.

    That's what great friends like you are for - to allow and help with grief and loss - this was a nice piece that illustrates that.

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-05-25 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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