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    dots Submission Name: Sanedots
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    Author: black_shadow
    ASL Info:    14/g/Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    1.4 - 1/2/6
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1136



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       This is an actual kind of torture in Japan or some other place in Asia and it kind of got to me...


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    dotsSanedots
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    No! No!
    This cant be happening!
    You cant do this!
    I scream at the top of my lungs
    to try and reduce my sentence.
    But it doesnt work.



    They sit me down in a chair
    and restrain my flailing arms.
    A man comes at me,
    a needle and thread in hand.
    He begins to sew open my eyes.
    Small streams of blood flow
    so i am not able to see.



    The man finishes his job,
    my eyes forever open,
    and drags me to a small room.
    Its white,
    pure white.
    There are bright lights
    so very bright.
    I desperately want to blink,
    to wake up and know its not real.
    But i cant;
    cant even fall asleep.



    Its so bright
    I cant stand this any longer.
    who knows how long
    i've been confined in this room,
    but i must get out.
    I cant let them win,
    let myself go insane.
    I know what is out there,
    and for that,
    i must stay,
    for as long as i can,
    sane.




    Submitted on 2007-05-25 14:18:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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