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    dots Submission Name: What Ifdots
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    Author: bleeding_sin
    ASL Info:    16/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 54/68/57
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this when me and Del started going out.


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    dotsWhat Ifdots
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    What if I lost my shoe
    What if my heart broke in two

    What if I lost my way
    What if it was always night never day

    What if I never talked
    What if I never learned to walk

    What if I said I loved you
    What if your heart turned blue

    What if the color was erased
    What if we all didn't have a face

    What if I cryed every night
    What if you turned away and left my kite

    What if you stayed
    What if my heart wouldn't have to pay

    What if love wasn't blind
    What if it didn't hurt but, was kind

    This poem from me to you
    I want you to know I love you too!!




    Submitted on 2007-05-25 14:53:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Such a bittersweet poem. I really enjoyed this. Beware of typos. (Stanza 8, line 1, Stanza 2, line 2)

    Keep Writing,
    Elle
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by GetFighted | [ Reply to This ]


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