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    dots Submission Name: My Nana's Eyesdots
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    Author: Suffer Well
    ASL Info:    36/F/East Coast
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 53/51/32
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1385



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    dotsMy Nana's Eyesdots
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    I see you everywhere
    in everything I do
    Your repeated words echo
    Your truth showing through

    I miss your gentle laughter
    your tender, worn old smile
    I never imagined after,
    without you for a while.

    I see your favorite color
    Your cherished foods to eat
    Your convictions that you held
    The places we would meet

    I miss you from my core
    Something has been taken
    A part of me feels alone
    Set apart and forsaken

    Nana, I love you
    I hope I told you this
    I hope you know how much
    I treasured your love and kiss

    I hope you always knew how much
    you calmed me and impelled
    Your point of view in mind and heart
    Hope your honor I upheld.

    Are you proud of me?
    Do I make you smile?
    Does God see?
    How I live this trial?

    Today I looked into the glass
    a gaze was reaching back
    I saw you in that looking glass
    and had my Nana back....

    I saw your eyes as clear as day
    Your soft, comforting stare
    It caused me pause within my day
    You were again right here.

    Cut from the same cloth
    Friends my whole lifelong
    I realize now you have not left
    You are with me all along




    Submitted on 2007-05-25 17:43:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "A very heart-wrenching poem filled with strong emotions. It causes me to think of my old silverhaired grandmother, who had the ability to give not only love, but sound advice when needed. In our modern world the value of the grandparent has been downplayed, probably due to the economic requirements of parents, who often have to move away from the original homestead in order to gain employment. I am glad I was raised in a better time and place, and it sounds like you were too. Thanks for sharing-----Mugsy-----P.S.--Was it your grandmother?--as the term is somewhat generic......
    | Posted on 2007-05-26 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]



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