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Looking Back

Author: stormkrow
ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
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As you can tell I wrote this poem for my brother and I wish that he would have taken the treatments but no he was way to stubborn for that .....
wonder if he is doing alright ........

Looking Back

Looking Back

As I sit under our tree
I look back at my pathetic excues of a life
sense you have been gone
I look back at all of the mistakes that Ihave made
and all of the misadventures that I have had
none were as hard or hurt so much as letting you go

Every one said that i should have let you go sooner
God knows how hard i tried no one can or ever will replace you
little brother.

As I sit under our tree
I look back and I
thank God that i have finally let you go

Rest in peace little brother

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