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    dots Submission Name: Looking Backdots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    24/ male / Montello Wi
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/52/39
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 635
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    Bytes: 650



    Description:
       As you can tell I wrote this poem for my brother and I wish that he would have taken the treatments but no he was way to stubborn for that .....
    wonder if he is doing alright ........


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    dotsLooking Backdots
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    Looking Back

    As I sit under our tree
    I look back at my pathetic excues of a life
    sense you have been gone
    I look back at all of the mistakes that Ihave made
    and all of the misadventures that I have had
    none were as hard or hurt so much as letting you go

    Every one said that i should have let you go sooner
    God knows how hard i tried no one can or ever will replace you
    little brother.

    As I sit under our tree
    I look back and I
    thank God that i have finally let you go

    Rest in peace little brother





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