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    dots Submission Name: The Answerdots

    Author: kingsley
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 100/59/46
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       thats how i see life sometimes except that :no matter how hard we try ,we cant have it all

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    dotsThe Answerdots

    What would you find and you will search no more?
    what would you have and you will seek no more?
    what would you eat and you will hunger no more?
    what would you take and you will ask no more?

    I found love and now im searching no more
    i have peace and now i seek no more
    i ate happiness and now i hunger no more
    i took GOD and now i ask no more
    for he always cares ;
    and the best thing that can happen to every human is:
    waking every morning knowing that someone cares

    Submitted on 2007-05-26 08:56:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dont know what i thought this was about but it definatly surpiresed me this was so good i mean wow. i can't even find the words this was so great and inspiring it lifted my day for me. something i forgot about and that is there is always god at the end and begining of every day. so thanks for reminding me. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      i am always searching for the one thing that will fill my hole.
    is it spiritual need?
    i do not know till i find it
    ive always tried to look in myself and tell myself there IS something more to life then just superficial happiness.
    but are we truly happy?
    when we lie in bed are we truly content how our life is?
    i am not. i think that i will find it. soon.

    this is a breathtakin peice
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by Inside Joke | [ Reply to This ]
      It is very reputitious but other than that i like it very much.
    It is very real, It made me feel like taking a closer look at my life to stop and think about all that I have right now, and all that has been taken away.
    One thing.. you could have described what those things were in your life or WHO those people were. Just ... you could have added more.
    Magger ; )
    | Posted on 2007-05-26 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]

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