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    dots Submission Name: Connotationdots
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    Author: carsayzylum
    ASL Info:    16/F
    Elite Ratio:    0.69 - 6/3/5
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 471
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 539



    Description:
       This was poorly written, it's a first draft.


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    dotsConnotationdots
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    Have you ever stopped to think about the words you say?
    Not the meanings-
    The words.

    They roll of your tongue so smooth,
    Like velvet, an impossible combination of sounds.
    But they flow-
    Giving new meaning, unspoken thought.

    They create more than they say,
    A feast for the ears,
    Alluring as diamonds without even being strung together.

    Speech is a human concept,
    Just listen to the sound-
    You'll discover even more.




    Submitted on 2007-05-26 16:27:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this peice of work sheds so much truth. sometimes if people only thought about how their 'harmless' words could affect people. Ive always said myself, that Verbal Abuse is just as harsh as Physical.
    good work!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by Inside Joke | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, actually, I liked it, even though it's a first draft.
    It made sense, but it seemed a bit as though you don't care what the words mean, but I still understand what you mean, .
    Good write.
    -Missy
    | Posted on 2007-05-26 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ]


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