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    dots Submission Name: Idealdots
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    Author: donforcl
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsIdealdots
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    Ancient history saved by example,
    Take no isolation, battle, fighting, golden rays,
    Travel, do something, land on feet,
    A beacon of ideal,
    Power of example,
    Leap of faith, dreams, embrace,
    Freedom, pinnacle, knowledge, endless years,
    No more fear, wounds,
    Healing, crave, understanding,
    Calming not threatening,
    Guide light.




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