the situation/s involved in this poem were too clear for the readers. you might want to add a little suspense or indirect imagery to excite feelings. this kind of emotion can be very powerful in poetry if you're going to play your words right.
although this is really cliché, it seems to always work.
because crushes and love are usually described in the same exact way, so it just ends up sounding the same.
i completely don't understand the title.
uhm.. i totally know how you feel about it all being a secret.
This was alright the usage of the words are too simple (im such hyprotict) useing more words descripitve words more thought thte piece and paint a better picutre for the reader other than that good job