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    dots Submission Name: My Musedots
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    Author: silverfragment
    ASL Info:    24/F/Montreal, Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 51/54/17
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Musedots
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    My muse is disturbed
    She only comes
    When I have tears
    To offer her
    In exchange for
    Inspiration

    Ma muse est dérangée
    Elle ne me visite
    Que lorsque je lui offre
    Des larmes
    En échange
    D’inspiration




    Submitted on 2007-05-26 19:50:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that is cool, it doesnt really rhyme, but is very interesting...i like this one

    Bella
    | Posted on 2007-09-07 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, with just a few lines you were able to vividly show the character of the "muse". Heavy emotions and situations were behind every word of this short piece.

    Shot me straight.
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by solitary_cross | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaah, the lady "Muse"! How fickle and impetuous she is! When we need her, she wants to play "hide and seek"; and when we're overwhelmed with the needs of duty, work, and chores, she flirts outrageously!

    This was marvelous, Katrina!!!

    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      she could be a he that's why. poe
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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