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Submission Name:
Locks of Love
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Author:
Inside Joke
ASL Info:
19/M/Demon State Cali
Elite Ratio:
3.09 - 7/3/2
Words:
63
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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Description:
Hair, the poem. Not the musical.
Locks of Love
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I adore long hair.
Long, long hair.
Dyke hair gets me nowhere.
Lesbos shoot yourself for all I care.
Nappy, crappy, get a weave.
You really turn me on, Steve.
Braided hurr
And braided thurr
That's why I play Tomb Raidurr.
Hair Straightener, you are my prized possession.
My number one obsession.
MOM!
MOM GET ME SOME MILK!
Submitted on 2007-05-27 00:45:47
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DUDE this poem is mad funny. and iyts not a MUSICAL.
Dude dont eat worms. Eat grass.
peace.
| Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by
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