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    dots Submission Name: Locks of Lovedots
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    Author: Inside Joke
    ASL Info:    19/M/Demon State Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 7/3/2
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 637
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 451



    Description:
       Hair, the poem. Not the musical.


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    dotsLocks of Lovedots
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    I adore long hair.
    Long, long hair.
    Dyke hair gets me nowhere.
    Lesbos shoot yourself for all I care.

    Nappy, crappy, get a weave.
    You really turn me on, Steve.

    Braided hurr
    And braided thurr
    That's why I play Tomb Raidurr.

    Hair Straightener, you are my prized possession.
    My number one obsession.

    MOM!

    MOM GET ME SOME MILK!




    Submitted on 2007-05-27 00:45:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      DUDE this poem is mad funny. and iyts not a MUSICAL.


    Dude dont eat worms. Eat grass.

    peace.
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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