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Submission Name:
Get Raped
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Author:
Inside Joke
ASL Info:
19/M/Demon State Cali
Elite Ratio:
3.09 - 7/3/2
Words:
97
Class/Type:
Lyrics/Passion
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Description:
An experience I experienced.
Get Raped
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He's eyeing me
up and down.
His forehead creased
into a frown.
GET RAPED!
GET RAPED!
I put my hand protectively on my crotch.
I see that my attacker likes this a lot.
GET RAPED!
GET RAPED!
My innocence is being violated,
and yet, I feel my little guy getting excited.
GET RAPED!
GET RAPED!
But this is wrong!
And I like girls!
And in an instant,
I almost hurl.
My pepper spray comes out
His eyes are wide, and then I shout;
GET RAPED!
GET RAPED!
Submitted on 2007-05-27 00:46:10
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I like it, your writing is very bold.
| Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by
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like DUDE. these lyrics are cool becuz they are different and I would like to hear iyt with some muzik
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yah laterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Da Grim Reaperessss
| Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by
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