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    dots Submission Name: Get Rapeddots
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    Author: Inside Joke
    ASL Info:    19/M/Demon State Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 7/3/2
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 892
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 677



    Description:
       An experience I experienced.


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    dotsGet Rapeddots
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    He's eyeing me
    up and down.
    His forehead creased
    into a frown.

    GET RAPED!
    GET RAPED!

    I put my hand protectively on my crotch.
    I see that my attacker likes this a lot.

    GET RAPED!
    GET RAPED!

    My innocence is being violated,
    and yet, I feel my little guy getting excited.

    GET RAPED!
    GET RAPED!

    But this is wrong!
    And I like girls!
    And in an instant,
    I almost hurl.

    My pepper spray comes out
    His eyes are wide, and then I shout;

    GET RAPED!
    GET RAPED!





    Submitted on 2007-05-27 00:46:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it, your writing is very bold.
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by carsayzylum | [ Reply to This ]
      like DUDE. these lyrics are cool becuz they are different and I would like to hear iyt with some muzik
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    yah laterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

    Da Grim Reaperessss
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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