A Love That Never Dies -------------------------------------------
A love that never dies
Is a love few may know
It's as painful as it comes
And as tender as it goes
One love that lasts forever
As steady as the rain
Could warm the coldest person
And break the strongest chains
It can make you immensly happy
As much as it tortures your soul
And when you think too much about it
It's all that your mind knows
This love is welded deep
In my heart it will always be
And though I will one day pass
My love will last eternally
Luscious :D
Absolutely wonderful.
It flows splendidly, and feels so deep and thoughtful.
It has a wonderful freelance feel, it sways from the advantages to the disadvantages of love beautifully.
its simple. and cool.but i believe you can dig deeper like give more thoght to it.when i read it it didnt make me want to read it again. i dont mean to be rude or disrespectful it was boring in my opinion. i'm just being honest
Very good flow.
i believe we are kindred in our thoughts of love.
we even love the dark beauty of it. Yet, it seems we see its end and wait for it.
the moment to pass. To awake with such heart ach that we bare in its intance moments. Then it too pass.
We are free, until the next chaptur and capture of our hearts and fixations of our minds.
good write
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Submission Name: A Love That Never Dies
