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    dots Submission Name: Dreamerdots
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    Author: Roula
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46/64/45
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDreamerdots
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    Late Sunday morning, I woke up
    retracing my footsteps.
    Slowly, time is passing by.

    Foreign simple pleasures
    draw me in; there are no worries.
    Dreamer, take me in.

    No one's fooling you,
    its another reminder of survival;
    the day unfolds, spinning out of control.

    Am I pursuing the right dreams?

    I always liked being different,
    but you're so much like me.
    I never know whats in store-

    So I leave it all behind.
    Maybe tomorrow,
    I just might believe you, dreamer.




    Submitted on 2007-05-27 18:51:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i really like this. da whole light feel throughout it is refreshing. The imagery is good and i like the light wording of it, almost like a dream :)
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely poem, Roula! Dream, then live the dream!
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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