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    dots Submission Name: Angle of Salvationdots
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    Author: caballero7137
    ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
    Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9/104/123
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsAngle of Salvationdots
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    Neither a word nor a letter
    will be left for you
    as I shall deny your pleasure
    of seeing me suffer.

    I blossom in awakening
    from the eerie grave
    you had tucked me in
    every single night.

    Getting fully dressed
    with my ironed flesh
    slithering away from coldness
    and smoky illusions.

    Being kissed by golden rays
    as new words and chapters
    are penned once more
    in the book of my soul
    that I have reclaimed
    with will and might.

    The will and might
    of a persistence knight
    that has finally drowned
    the alienation of Life
    from heart,
    soul and mind.








    Submitted on 2007-05-27 19:29:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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