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Angle of Salvation

Author: caballero7137
ASL Info:    22/m/victoriaville
Elite Ratio:    0.72 - 9 /104 /123
Words: 112
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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Angle of Salvation

Neither a word nor a letter
will be left for you
as I shall deny your pleasure
of seeing me suffer.

I blossom in awakening
from the eerie grave
you had tucked me in
every single night.

Getting fully dressed
with my ironed flesh
slithering away from coldness
and smoky illusions.

Being kissed by golden rays
as new words and chapters
are penned once more
in the book of my soul
that I have reclaimed
with will and might.

The will and might
of a persistence knight
that has finally drowned
the alienation of Life
from heart,
soul and mind.

Submitted on 2007-05-27 19:29:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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