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    dots Submission Name: one way road and two face coindots
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    Author: xana
    ASL Info:    17/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 34/35/24
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsone way road and two face coindots
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    one way road and two face coin,
    muscles torn and aching joints.
    wicked times - the world's in bath,
    bath of blood, of tears, of wrath.
    comming faster than the light
    to the broken bones' delight.
    Death is flying on its way
    who will stay? and who will pay?




    Submitted on 2007-05-27 22:26:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a good one a nice point
    | Posted on 2007-05-27 00:00:00 | by boya | [ Reply to This ]


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