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    dots Submission Name: im the one that pushed you awaydots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsim the one that pushed you awaydots
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    it feels so different now
    i was so use to it just being me and you
    life for me is not the same
    you seem to be taken away by them
    i dont know why i acted like
    we didnt mean anything to me
    now starting over its so hard
    it seems like every where i try to go
    i just keep thinking about you
    i just had a wake up call
    that im the one that pushed you away
    see you are not to blame at all
    maybe if i showed i cared
    you wouldnt have went no where
    i should of been right there
    i miss you so bad I cant sleep
    now with all of them after you
    im getting pushed away
    to the back of your mind


    deticated to: Hunter




    Submitted on 2007-05-27 22:47:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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