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    dots Submission Name: no difference in my heart anymoredots

    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 639
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dots no difference in my heart anymoredots

    with all of them liking you
    i seem to be pushed
    to the back of your mind
    you say that you love me
    but you say it to alot of girls
    it makes no difference in my heart anymore
    and its sad when they ask
    "why do you love him"
    and i cant answer it but i can
    but when you act all flirty with them
    i have to say "i dont know but whatever it is i dont see it anymore"
    im playing my part and your playing with them
    thing where so different
    when it was just me and you
    we where happier and
    you knew who you loved that was me
    and i had no worrys
    now im lost and confused
    i have alot to lose if i screw up
    being with you was heaven
    but you this way is being put threw hell

    come back to me
    let it be only me and you agian

    deticated to: Hunter Greiner

    Submitted on 2007-05-27 23:04:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It seems a bit cluttered, but I can totally understand how you feel. Then again, I'm crazy, don't mind me.

    I adore this line.
    "im playing my part and your playing with them"

    | Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by V3ND3TTA | [ Reply to This ]
    I can so relate to this,
    Beautifully & honestly written,
    Well Done! ^_^
    | Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by LiFeS_aCoMpLiCe | [ Reply to This ]

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