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    dots Submission Name: A SPYdots
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    Author: SAMEER
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDIA
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 47/21/28
    Words: 600
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 109
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    A bullet was shot
    Blood rushing from my heart
    I did die that night
    Never thought
    I would die be killed by a spy
    Who turned out to be, none other
    Than my own lady a lie


    Ten days back from today
    I met her own my way
    At a place where she used to stay
    She was young and lonely
    With no one to spend a day
    I spoke to her
    Man of true words
    My name – The Bard
    I have come here lady
    To make myself your lord
    My fame-
    I am the secret card
    Working for India on accord
    She did cry
    I don’t know why?
    Hugged me so tight
    I felt it was falling the sky


    I led a happy life
    For a week maybe
    Until I heard the thought
    Which was nagging in my mind
    Kept telling to me
    I was sometimes being blind
    I needed to unwind
    The truth about past, her behind


    It was then I realized
    She had me all the time hypnotized
    The realization
    Caused in her a source
    The force of which
    Knocked me down the course
    I dint regret
    Cause I never did believe in love
    It was for her
    Who made me live in love?


    A day back from today
    She was searching my room
    I tried to stop her
    She tried using a broom
    She wanted to fight
    And even tried to bite
    I knew what she was looking
    There was something fishy cooking
    She was looking for the files
    That contained India’s new missiles


    I kept it in a box
    And the key was in my socks
    A gun was pointed at my face
    I was forced to tell its trace
    I had to tell
    She did smile at me
    Her last smile
    And asked in style
    My last wish
    Her mind was acting like a fish
    She thought I would be selfish
    Or would I ask for my last dish


    I replied,
    I don’t have a request
    I have finished my quest
    And now I will rest
    With these words
    I did end my life
    Cause she shot at my heart
    And it was time I did depart


    Falling down
    Losing my life
    I saw her eyes
    Filled with shock
    Not able to talk
    No! It was not for me
    She was not depressed of my death
    But in her mind
    It was rewinding my last words
    About my finished quest
    “Her mind it was thinking
    Was it true?
    Could it be?
    Has he tricked me?”


    She had no time to lose
    Had to run
    Leave this country
    They were behind her the ministries
    She did escape
    Arrived at a new cape
    Opened the box
    Using a rock
    But all she heard
    Was the ticking of the clock?
    She had no time
    To look what was inside
    Before that there was a blast
    And like a pointing guide
    Her bones were lying on the beach side.



    ---THE BARD




    Submitted on 2007-05-28 02:03:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      really powerful ending. i liked it. there were some parts that felt a little too extended though. very good overall.
    | Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by Vile Deception | [ Reply to This ]



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