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    dots Submission Name: Hurtful Promisesdots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsHurtful Promisesdots
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    Can you feel what I write? do you feel the emotion I put into it... Of pain, hurt and betrayal... Of giving your all but having nothing come back... If you can even just feel what I'm talking about... Write it down here...and tell me... Share it with me...because I am truly lost...


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    I stand alone again, after it all has past
    Of all the things I have torn from my heart in sacrafice,
    Do you feel how worthless I feel, when you make me feel like I mean nothing at all...

    Everything that was best of me, I gave to you
    You had gentle and kind words then, caring and loving and I believed them,
    But as I am on my knees crying, all of those words were lies...

    I stood by your side when you needed me without question
    My effort count for nothing, and you dont care of all what I did,
    Why? Didnt I keep my promise to you...?

    Past soo much pain that I ever felt, I never abandoned you
    But you abandon me, like I meant nothing...nothing at all,
    I find little words to tell you how hurtful it is...

    Do you know how I feel?
    The feeling when nobody cares for you...
    Completly alone...
    That is what you make me feel
    But no, it wasnt enough...
    You lied to me from the start
    What did I ever do to hurt you to deserve this...

    But its alright isnt it?
    Blame me, and set it that I am wrong...
    Let me take the fault,
    And promise you that I will never open myself again...
    Isnt it the last thing I can do...?
    When I am completly broken like this...




    Submitted on 2007-05-28 13:25:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      dont talk about yourself as if you are worthless
    she ain't worth it if she wants you to be like this.
    look up and live on. life sucks. no doubt.
    but who cares?
    make a difference. change the world. help. prevent this in others.
    dont tell me there is not a single thing in the world that helps the pain pass? Not a person? Not a thing? Not someone that breaks out a smile onto your face, whether with love or without?
    Not a movie you enjoy, not a comedy? not a storybook?
    as long as you do have one, you have no right to say that you are filled with pain and hurt. like as if its the end of the world. because its not.
    you'll make another day, ill guarantee it.
    you always do.
    cuz we all trust you to always be there.
    its the way the world goes around.
    lifes sucks. love hurts. betrayal is a knife digging into your heart.
    but look up. live again. thats what we're made for: to get through the day.
    that's what i think. even though i do slightly emphasize on the emo part. =P

    see you round jamsie poo.
    love. fung
    | Posted on 2007-06-30 00:00:00 | by deathbroken | [ Reply to This ]



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