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    dots Submission Name: MUSTER UPdots
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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1079
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 918



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       courage!


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    dotsMUSTER UPdots
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    MUSTER UP the mustard
    for a sharp flavor
    for life, a tangy approach
    that will leave your mouth watering
    for what you will get next...

    sweeten the vinegar,
    with a brown sugar tounge
    a homely compassion
    that will make your mouth fancy
    what you will get next...

    pick raw fruit and vegetables
    brush off the dirt, but
    a lil' dirt donít hurt,
    so you can feel the whole earth
    and crave getting deeper into
    what you have got,
    and what you will get next...

    eat the whole fortune cookie
    (for it ain't nothin' if it ain't for free)
    crunching into all the Love you get
    and digesting every morsel,
    so that it becomes you,
    and not letting the taste leave,
    letting you have a lil' luck
    in all you will get next...




    Submitted on 2007-05-28 15:15:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      delisiouse
    | Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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