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    dots Submission Name: my dads tiesdots
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    Author: mitch_s_grl
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    dotsmy dads tiesdots
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    I love the way he makes me love him
    and the way he loves me back,
    and if all he said waz a lie ,
    ill just go get one of my dads ties
    and put it tight around my neck
    and after an hour or two
    ill take it off
    to reveal the bruises and the red marks
    the indents and the scars
    i do this all for you to prove to you that i love you
    why cant you see that
    the next time he sees me
    the bruises and the red marks the indents
    and the scares
    maybe just maybe he will take me back.








    Submitted on 2007-05-28 16:15:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      All I want to say is check your grammer, your punctuation, your spelling, your structure.
    | Posted on 2007-05-28 00:00:00 | by HiddenConfines | [ Reply to This ]



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