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Submission Name:
One last time
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Author:
sweetme16
ASL Info:
18/f/who cares
Elite Ratio:
2.21 - 108/251/162
Words:
55
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
Total Views:
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Description:
like the title says its about asking for a "one last time"
One last time
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Will you hug me
One last time
Will you hold me
One last time
Will you kiss me
One last time
Will you love me
One last time
Will you laugh with me
One last time
Will you come back
And be forever mine
One last time
Submitted on 2007-05-29 12:17:08
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in some way this has feeling meaning but there should be more words so it makes understandable but other words it seems has if there is just something missing from the poem as if it needs something more
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