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    dots Submission Name: No Moredots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 671



    Description:
       This is one of my "venting" poems. Please tell me what you think and please be honest.


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    dotsNo Moredots
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    No more will I help
    People who abuse it.
    No more will I answer
    The phone when they call.

    No more will I listen
    As they constantly complain.
    Because they never listen
    To any of my problems.

    No more will I
    Do anything that
    Will greatly help them
    While I fail.

    No more can I
    Stand it.
    No more can I
    Conceal it.

    I have to let
    It out and tell them
    That No more will
    I help them.

    No more will I
    Put their needs,
    Questions, and problems before mine
    No more will I!




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 15:49:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good writing here! What inspried you to write this beutiful poem if I may ask I felt the emotions in this poem.
    I like this one.

    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-06-02 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]


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