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    dots Submission Name: True vs. Falsedots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    18 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 21/37/26
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 832



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    dotsTrue vs. Falsedots
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    It’s getting harder,
    Much, much harder,
    To have to pretend,
    To have to act,
    To have to lie.

    I can’t take it anymore.
    They were my friends,
    Now, they’re not.
    They don’t get me
    And they never will.

    My new friends understand.
    They listen when I talk,
    They see my aggravation,
    They know when I’m angry,
    They just don’t shrug off my pain.

    They want to talk it out,
    They want to know what’s wrong,
    They want to help as best they can.
    But my old friends don’t really care,
    All they hope is that it isn’t their fault.

    But it is their fault,
    They’ll never understand,
    But I can’t hurt them
    So I won’t tell them
    And I’ll just keep it inside.




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 15:57:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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