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    dots Submission Name: True vs. Falsedots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 630
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    Bytes: 832



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    dotsTrue vs. Falsedots
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    Itís getting harder,
    Much, much harder,
    To have to pretend,
    To have to act,
    To have to lie.

    I canít take it anymore.
    They were my friends,
    Now, theyíre not.
    They donít get me
    And they never will.

    My new friends understand.
    They listen when I talk,
    They see my aggravation,
    They know when Iím angry,
    They just donít shrug off my pain.

    They want to talk it out,
    They want to know whatís wrong,
    They want to help as best they can.
    But my old friends donít really care,
    All they hope is that it isnít their fault.

    But it is their fault,
    Theyíll never understand,
    But I canít hurt them
    So I wonít tell them
    And Iíll just keep it inside.




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 15:57:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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