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    dots Submission Name: Simple[Complex] Questionsdots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSimple[Complex] Questionsdots
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    I cantí trust them,
    And they canít trust me.
    They lie to me,
    An I lie to them.
    What kind of friendship is that?

    I want to confront them,
    But there is never a good
    Time, place, or way to.
    I want to tell them but
    How do I tell them?

    They donítí try to include me,
    But they talk of their plans to me.
    They just do this to gloat.
    In the end, they donít invite me.
    Why do they do that?

    They laugh at me.
    They have their own jokes.
    I donít fit in,
    And Ďm not sure I want to.
    Why canít I have new friends
    Who understand?




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 16:00:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed this complex questioning piece - sometimes this is how I feel when I am working very hard spiritually and in my readings and studies I discover things I already sensed or knew but feel like others, in this life, do not understand me.

    I'm reading a book, "The Illustrated - On The Shoulders Of Giants" by Stephen Hawking and it has great thinkers such as Newton, Einstein, Copernicus, Galilei, Kepler and I related your title to this - simple [Complex] because that is how all explanations are and trying to "fit in" can mean any number of things.

    Great thoughtful write!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-06-07 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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