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    dots Submission Name: Somebody Like Medots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSomebody Like Medots
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    They have their own circle,
    Same 3 as before,
    Now plus one more.
    They are so tight,
    They are so close.

    They call me their friend,
    They act like they like me,
    But I donít belong with them.
    They claim to be close to me,
    But they never truly will be.

    They make feel me as though
    I am a nobody,
    I am a nothing,
    I am unimportant,
    I am a lower person than they are.

    They annoy me,
    When they claim to be better,
    And say ĎI hate it when
    They donít let me iní,
    But I donít feel sorry for them
    Because now they see how it feels
    To be somebody like me.




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      I remember and even recently have felt this way. I went to a large party and suddenly was overcome with anxiety like I used to feel in highschool - even though I ran with an "in" crowd I always felt un-noticed and mis un-derstood.
    It's not always easy but that is part of the struggle in loving self. We love ourselves in divine ways the world may sometimes never show.

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    tif
    | Posted on 2007-06-09 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written, Kristen! It has both story and great feeling!
    | Posted on 2007-05-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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