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    dots Submission Name: the witchcraft of unrelenting hoursdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsthe witchcraft of unrelenting hoursdots
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    i'd rather face my impotency now
    than a decade down the lane
    when the waste of a harvest spoiled
    will soil the seeds of another

    & put a perfumed wreathe
    around the valiantly vain grasps
    that failed to return any jewels,
    around the lingering wounds
    that camouflaged into butterflies
    just as i tried to pinch them
    so that the soul escaped
    leaving my fingers
    smudged in mixed colours

    life suspended between
    tricky shadows and trickier psyches
    unfurls its seven dimensions accidentally
    like a hologram under whimsical lights
    perhaps mine will get caught
    only when the candle inches
    towards its fag end
    burning the most brightly,
    defiantly
    squatting in a pool of its molten self
    for that will be the time to defeat
    the witchcraft of unrelenting shadows
    the motley of dark twisted ghosts
    that hang around you and weigh you down till one day you become one with them...
    and are thenceforth set free




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 17:43:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      no love, no legacy can burn as bright. as your ashen words. such sparks the prove the catalyst inside me. i wait on baited breath for the next.

    like good wine. dark and intoxicating. not my favorite piece but still written in form that brings light to unseeing eyes.


    in shadow
    | Posted on 2007-06-18 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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