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Author: darkwiccan14
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Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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doesnt' make any sense unless your me. But that's ok, just read it! lol


Once upon a time
There was you
And there was

WE were as happy
As everybody that
Was anybody could
Ever BE.

But then there was
A time when the
Wicked Witch came
Along, meddled in
Our business and
Took you away.

I was then lost
And thought I'd
Lost the game,
Never to voice
Or hear anyone
Again say your name.

While I was gone
From thought or
Life, I watched
The leaves of
The trees sway.

When can
I have YOU
Back and BE
HAPPY again?

I feel as if
I'm not really


In the dark,
Waiting for the

For being away
Seemed far too
Long, then along
YOU came back
to me!

Tears rolling on
each face,
And just so HAPPY
to know I won't
Have nothing to send.

TO send,
Anything to
Anybody for your return.

To send.

For you,


Submitted on 2007-05-29 18:46:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It sounds so sad. Good luck
| Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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