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Electric Blue Eyes

Author: darkwiccan14
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C.S. love ur eyes !!! lol yet again! another poem alast! that doesnt still make sense!!

Electric Blue Eyes

Eyes electric blue,
and as cool,
as can be.

You make me wonder,
what's so special bout',

So calm and,
Powerful and yet,

I get Lost
In trance,
So happy in thought.

Where oh where,
was the place those
eyes where bought?

I love em',
When I see them.

And love em',
When even just thinking bout them,

How could I
Not get lost or
And wonder
those beautiful,

Submitted on 2007-05-29 18:52:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm more of a hazel kind of gal But blue can be beautiful too.. good wright
| Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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