Love Takes Flight

Author: LadyMustang ASL Info:    42, female, West Virginia Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 222 /171 /71 Words: 120

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Love Takes Flight

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Love Takes Flight Come,My love Fly with my spirit upon wings of night, As our soul catches the glimmering stars when our love takes flight. Come run with me Let's stroll along the edges of passion's fire, From dusk til dawn as we intertwine in the ecstasy of desire. Come lay with me My love as our bodies never tire, As the juices of our love flow we become one glowing in the flmes of love's eternal fire. Come kiss me My love let me taste your lips so sweet, As we come face to face with a kiss this love makes us so complete. Written By: Ladymustang copyright@ 2007

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i liked it all, the only thing i didn't find interesting was that all the vocabulary and wording is the same as the one about the roses. the idea of this poem was good and something easy to work with, but it's just another copy of the other one with a different title. it could be better. Peace<3 <bleedingtears>

| Posted on 2007-06-01 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]

I really enjoyed it. It reminds me of a new relationship, or the high your on a few months after marriage. Well written, good job.

| Posted on 2007-05-30 00:00:00 | by Broken Halo | [ Reply to This ]

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