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    dots Submission Name: Home is where the street isdots
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    Author: griffin
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 0/2/26
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Invisible to the naked eye
    Urban foot soldiers never stop to wonder why this science project gone awry
    Their charity is haphazard

    No carpet under their feet
    The incessant pleas drown, like prayers under a silent sound
    Is the cold insistent concrete

    Hands reaching finding no relief
    A fools paradise within their grasp
    Anything to escape this gray beat,
    When all you can carry is the past

    Spare the crumbs of elegant meals
    To assuage the conscious mind
    The road to immortality has been paved and sealed
    With the green of generosity

    Always courtside..aren’t these the best seats?
    Underground, undertow, hand to mouth
    What glory do they now suppose?

    Wash yourselves of them
    Their foul, their stench
    Covered in the loneliness
    Of defeat

    Chasing sparrows into the elusive blue
    Stained with the muck of yesterday
    Tattered, torn,
    Is this the brown cloak of warmth?




    Submitted on 2007-05-29 19:37:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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