Description: This is just a short poem that has yet to be perfected. It is based off of a feeling that I had and I posted on an old forum known as Shadows and Whispers.
lovley and intigueing. greta images pop up and the emotion that seems to flow from the way the words are used together. a very excellent piece like the other two said, truely worth the read. once again great job.
Lovely, short but sweet. Wings whisper sounds as if even the simple sounds that come at night have significance, like Ron said, it almost seems as if you are describing two people who find refuge in the night to be together. Like I said short but very intreaging.
Makes me think of moods so quiet and nights so black that even whispers have an echo! This is a stunning piece! It is short, but it is enchanting and intrigueing; it inspires vivid mind views!
Submission Name: Whisper Shadows
